HELP ME WITH MY BOOK DESCRIPTION
I’m agonizing over the description for my upcoming book (I’m getting ready to add it to Amazon as a pre-order). I’d love your feedback! Does the below make you want to run out and buy it? If not, let me know why (or if so, let me know why too!!)
The Girl Who Wants
(A Fast-Paced Romantic Suspense Mystery Thriller Packed with Unlimited Secrets and Twists)
Shee wants a home.
Shee McQueen grew up skip tracing and hunting military criminals with her father, Mick, until someone put a bounty on her head, forcing her underground. Resurfacing seventeen years later, she returns to her family’s hotel in Jupiter Beach, FL, to find him in a coma, shot in the head by an unknown sniper.
Shee wants answers.
Mick’s hotel is staffed by a collection of damaged military veterans looking to redeem their troubled souls by helping others. Neither her father’s crazy on-again, off-again girlfriend nor her maniacal Yorkshire terrier can provide many clues as to what happened to him. Shee doesn’t know if her father’s new mission, or her own past has made him a target, or… wait a second. Hold on…
Shee wants to know why her ex-boyfriend just showed up.
How did Mason, the young SEAL she fell for at eighteen, track her down? She’s been keeping a secret from him for almost thirty years. Why did he have to show up now, demanding answers and looking so damn good?
Shee wants a cocktail.
She’s lost decades, people she loves, and herself on the road.
No more running.
No more secrets.
Enough is enough.
Shee wants revenge.
Let me know what you think in the comments below or by email: firstname.lastname@example.org Thank you!!
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